So I wrote a little poem on a sudden whim, and I thought to share it.
It's Autumn!
Watch as the leaves,
Fall from the trees,
Turning brown,
They drift to the ground,
The birds are leaving,
The bears are sleeping.
That was just something small I made up. I thought you might want to edit it for me. And by the by, Autumn is my favorite season of the year (though that might just be 'cause my b-day is in Autumn).
I like the name 'Autumn' better than 'Fall', it just sounds more poetic.
;-) Trixie
I like the name 'Autumn' better than 'Fall', it just sounds more poetic.
;-) Trixie
Wow. Thats so... like... how did you get it to rhyme abd maje sense and have a consistent beat. The only thing I would change is I would make Its Autumn! , the title cause it doesnt fit the diamiter of the rest of the poem.
ReplyDeleteWow!!!!!
Why do perfect comments have to have typos??? Rggg
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DeleteWOW! you have talent!
ReplyDeleteLove the poem!
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
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PS. I am using my sister's Google plus account.